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If I Were Invisible... by ~shard-sama:iconshard-sama:



If I could be invisible whenever I wanted,
Then I would never be seen.
The world would fade away around me
And I would finally be free.

I could do what I want and live as I want
And none would know who I am
None would try to hold onto me
And I’d do whatever I can

People would not know I even existed
Nor would they ever care
If I were invisible, oh, were I invisible
I would not even be there.
©2008 ~shard-sama
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We had a journal in Humanities to day.

If I could be invisible whenever I wanted...

So, the result?

This.

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Poem:// ~shard-sama
Prompt:// Radha
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~Ray-Zarra:iconRay-Zarra: Apr 22, 2008, 6:22:10 PM
what would you go do exactly, make comics for your self?
~shard-sama:iconshard-sama: Apr 22, 2008, 9:23:21 PM
Were I invisible, I may not even know of all this. I started making comics on Neopets, which was introduced to me by an Ex-Friend.

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~Radioactivepancakes:iconRadioactivepancakes: Apr 23, 2008, 4:21:19 AM
never knew you wrote poems!!

gewd gewd!

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Because i'm cool like that.
~shard-sama:iconshard-sama: Apr 23, 2008, 12:13:53 PM
Thanks.

And I've been writing for some time now.

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~Ray-Zarra:iconRay-Zarra: Apr 23, 2008, 7:04:57 PM
well you have to have a reason to be invisible
~shard-sama:iconshard-sama: Apr 23, 2008, 7:09:57 PM
Ya a writing prompt

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~Bluefire-the-Fox:iconBluefire-the-Fox: Apr 26, 2008, 9:06:20 AM
If I were invisible
I'd hope my clothes were too
Cuz I wouldn't want to them to impair
My ability to be seen through
~shard-sama:iconshard-sama: Apr 26, 2008, 1:07:31 PM
*slap*

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Local Fluffy Thief and Furry Artist. Maybe I'll get on humans soon.

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~Bluefire-the-Fox:iconBluefire-the-Fox: Apr 26, 2008, 9:26:26 PM
Well I have a good point there.